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One of my very early animations, the sound has slight gaps in but that wasnt my fault (shh). As i said it was one of my first so dont be too harsh with your comments.
Everything is in...
Shadows! I've seen this a lot, and it just looks like laziness.
I would have understood if you're going for a dark, shadowed theme, but if the walls are light enough to have detail, then so should the characters.
All and all, I liked it. The humor was cute, and the slide across the roof was nice, hehe.
i like the shadow style, really does add the mistery, looks cool , i like the matrix music and well..great :P
Well..about the overall plot. Everything else seemed fine..except for the music breaks but its alright. =). I did like how you made the people into 'shadows'....but it makes me curious of what they really look like...=)
((( OK )))
Hmm there is not much of a story just about a guy breaking in to get something, but its still pretty good, i like the way your made your introduction to this animation, and how much detail you put into things. Your style is nice, and i see you love the color purple which was cool.
Maybe next time you could add more of a story to it, and explain why he is doing this...
this was a stupid flash
this was very boring and stupid
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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