((( DECENT )))

This was decent but could use some more work to it, the "CHARACTERS" were ok but would be better if more effort and detail was put into them, also the animation was abit choppy could be somewhat smoother but was still fine by me the way it ran, good flash though, hope to see more soon...

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Advice just from watching your two flashes on NG

Dude, You have talent. You could do alot of good stuff. Heres what I htink you could do though.

1.) Your base animation is fine. I like the sketchy human look, its a very beautiful more 'human' way of drawing. You draw very good at complimenting faces and other atributes of humans. What you could do. Is highlight the characters a little bit more. Add a little extra textrue to the grass. and to the rain. Rain is water, water is blue, blue is not black, and water is made of droplets. draw the lines. then after that edit and color. Lil bit of depth for minimal work.

2.) Keep some of the backround rolling while your people are moving. I understand for this flash you wanted to keep it very simple. because its the meaning. but that doesnt mean that you couldent keep even the rain going on while he walked.

3.) sound effects. I watched your other flash, Pretty good. Just work on the sound quality for sound effects and music a lil. Easy idea for helping that is lower the sound of everything and make us raise voloume.

4.) your action is a lil choppy, add an extra frame or two. that simple

Great job, dude.

Hey Mile. 'Tis Connor. Nice job on this thing, truly kickass for someone our age. Keep doin' what you're doin'. By the way, I think I'm gonna post some Flash movies of my own in a month or so. I just need a bit more practice. Good luck, and e-mail meh when you submit more stuff!

this sucks

this sucks twice

pretty cool

I remember playing that on ps1 dude. That movie brought back a few memories.... however, I don't remember the ships ever blowing up.

The best part about this was the artwork. Assuming you didn't trace anything, nice job on that. =)