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Well this is my first flash. It's not very long but watch it anyway :)
Pez39 is just some psychopath who goes around killing people or something.
It was...interesting. The cross thing did throw me off, but it was a nice addition. Why didn't you have him like..fuck the corpse?.. I mean...uh...I'm just..throwing stuff out here...*cough*..yeah....
This is some great stuff. I like the style of this. There sure is some crazy violence in this flash. The movie was rather short... great music though.. but it would have been better if there was more and showed the reason as to why that guy was killing hat other dude.
Im honored to be used in your first submission
Alright heres what I think... I believe in doin your own thing and not being concerned with what the majority thinks. I guess you made this for shock value, and you did a good job.
Things I liked- Amazing Music :P, great synching of audio and video, I thought the animation was great for your first flash.
Things It coulda done with out- If you wanted it to get a higher score I woulda first changed the crusifying scene cause that will upset alot of people and make them vote 0, It was also to short- the song doesn't end there you didnt get to the snare or guitar riff. I would recommend building on what you have. extend it another minute or so (Make it as violent and disgusting as you can, just leave out any religous stuff). If you want any ideas just email me.
Your off to a great start. make sure to use more of my audio in your submissions for the future. I can even custom make you something Ü.
The beginning animation looked really promising but it did seem to decline in quality as the flash progressed... The whole cross thing completely threw me off and tuned me out but it was good for shock value. Kinda smart really, something I won't forget soon. Song was perfect for the flash too, good taste
Dude that was some really weird, crazy, psychotic shit.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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