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i am a beginer at flash and this was a test on a lot of new things like 3d backgrounds, moving backgrounds and colour gradients. i am slowly getting better and i am working on many new BETTER flashes.
prety boring realy
i gues it's SUPPOSED to be funny ... it's not!
((( GOOD BUT COULD BE IMPROVED )))
This was ok, i like how you added the menus in the start like of characters and such, but some of the artwork was abit sloppy, and gradients are ok but more detailed shading and effects might work better, the "CURSER" was neat but it could lag up the movie, anyways nice flash it was interesting...
Hmmm...where the hell is my tracks?
This was an average flash...but good for beginner....but the hell where is my tracks im in the artist list and that but i didnt hear them in the flash!
im pretty sure one of your songs is in my flash...if not...sorry for the mistake
Wasn't very promising
Meh, not really a good movie. I saw this was just a test and all that, but you don't have to submit this on NG then. Many people just submit it for some weird reason. Maybe they hope to get a suprisingly high score or something.
Anyway, there were a couple of bad things about this. First of all, the graphics could be a lot better. There was too much ur... what's the word?... use of "tints" (I hope you know what I mean). You might think people will like it that way, but I think it just looks very bad. The last part with the tank could also use some improvement, cause it looked very crappy. Second, you should add some more sounds. Those are pretty important actually. Especially part two, that really needs some sword sounds. Third, the character introductions at the beginning was really unnecessary. Like the ninja that could become liqued, he didn't do that in the movie anyway. So, if I were you I would remove all that, cause it makes no sense.
Well I know this was all just a test so you probably wouldn't improve anything I've written above. Anyway I hope you'll get better at flash, cause this wasn't very promising. Overall I'd give it 4 out of 10, 2 out of 5. Good luck with any future projects then.
k thanks, im slowly improving
hm, wha, goa?
We didn't really need the character introductions, you know. It was far too short and none of them interacted. That was just weird.
I liked the tank tricks tho :P
it wasnt meant to be like a game even though loads of peoples have said the intro makes it look like it should be
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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