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A little flash I whipped up..It isn't the best thing I've created but It's my first submission to Newgrounds!
Thanks for all the good reviews...And for all the criticism...I can work off that.
UPDATE: I tweaked a few things and the sound FX are a little better.
i am not a pie
its ok... fuk no it aint
If you look hard you might find some philosophical meaning to this piece. I really liked it.
the beginning was horribly boring. but i liked the way you did some of the later things, changing the eyes to feet, mouth to boat etc., keep it up! :)
Spend more time with the lines
It was a little sketchy, and if your going o do sketchy you have to go ALL THE WAY sketchy. + need more of a story to tell, try to only use acouple colors with stuff like that and make sure the lines are strain, the brush makes it a bit blotchy, pretty good for your first atempt
It was all a little half-assed. But it was nice for a first try.
I really liked the music for some odd reason, it was nice and eerie.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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