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My first flash here on Newgrounds, I did it as a school assigment for my sister... I hope you all like it!
Your flash rocks!
Man, that's twice in a row you've got me. I still prefer "Who Goes There?" but this is class aswell.
The style is very very cool. Keep going because your definately gonna create something tremendous soon. Well done.
Your marked in my faves.
Thanks man! really glad to hear that you like my stuff! again thanks a million!
Dude, i liked the storyline, very nicely done, you are getting better and better. I hope to see more from you. Again Nice JOB
Glad you liked it, there will be more to come, thanks again!
I liked the idea a lot, and though you need to work on your graphics, the realisation of the plot was excellent. It touched my heart, really. Maybe add a little more anger and sorrow? Anyways, waiting to see a new one!
Thank you! Glad you like it!
you have an interesting story evolving, you should make a part two. Not to shabby for your first flash animation. My only critique would be to change the spelling at the end of your flash. Watching is spelt with one h in it. Keep on trying :)
The spelling is fixed now on the original, but Iam not going to make a part two but I have some thoughts about making a longer version about Death and the end of the world. still Iam very glad you like it! Thank you!
Not too bad
Well for your first flash I have to be nice so I'm not blamming you..For a first timer it wasn't too bad, your music was in time with your flash so that was pretty good keep up the work
Ill try, and thank you for watching!
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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