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My first flash submition to newgrounds, but not my first flash. No story. Hasty work. Took about 2 hours to make.
I wasn't good, but it wasn't bad.
This should've gotten at least a 2.00 score. It's a pretty good FBF. And I haven't seen a non-moving background FBF in a while, but you pulled it off quite nicely.
Ways to improve:
1. The music ended abruptly. Since you're using streamed music, add credits to extend the music's length.
It's cool, fast and sounds good. I love it.
that was cool!!!!!!
make your graphics fine and add some story and interactivity this will make this emerett vs dragon a good one
if better make it a sequel so that the people will try to find out what will happen next. in result it will make your submissions placed at the front page ok
Not bad for a first try
You did good don't worry about your score it don't matter what does is you tried your best...o hell it sucked but not as bad as some of the stuff people have sent in today I mean come on the little black dot that could lol. anyways 2 hours don't rush your projects newgorunds is not going anywhere unless Tom Dies anyways try harder next time!
Strengths: you did well to build up tension & anticipation in the opening scenes - the music & animation style was a great introduction to the two lead characters. I also thought the background was a great idea & sort of represented medieval times, which is pretty good.. The music, overall, was suitable because it was action-packed... finally, there was quality illustrations in the drawings: simple style, but not too simple
Weaknesses: sound effects would be good, eg. dragon breathing fire OR knight slicing through the dragons scales.. the addition of visual effects would be enjoyable as well... the ending ended abruptly and not too spectacularly - needs improvement & more detail. Overall, nice submission.. i look forward to seeing more works that are over 2 hours hehe
Welcome to the theatre of your mind, Dale
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