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05/21/2005 | 07:04PM EST
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2.29 / 5.00
Score Rank: #98,302 Popularity Rank: #38,681
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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This is my first full length (and by that I mean finished) flash movie. I did it for my web design class, but my friends thought it was funny and suggested I submit it to Newgrounds, so I went and did something that I have usually found to be incredibly stupid: listened to them. Anyway, review it as you see fit, I know it'a not up to most people's high standards (especially graphics-wise, though the sound isn't so hot either), but I had fun making it. =)
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Average Score: 6.4 / 10
"omfg..."
That was PWN3D. I seen people with simular problems like that, when one car looks like another its best to look for your licence plate. Neat show though, I liked it.
"Buena idea, deberías hacer el "remake"..."
Definitivamente es algo original, pero la idea en general es opacada por la deficiente calidad en los dibujos y el estílo de la animación (tu lo sabes). La música es adecuada, sin embargo, en el aspecto de los sonidos, creo que podrían exagerarse un poco más (para que se note que el personaje sufre). Podías agregarle talvez un sonido de dientes rechinando, cuando se encabrona y cree que ya no hay más remedio (es sólo mi opinión). Espero pronto puedas hacer otra, para ver que otras cosas se te ocurren (yo por mi cuenta no he tenido tiempo de continuar con un par de animaciones que he dejado a medias).
"Not bad at all..."
For you first full length. The things I would say I'm sure you already know, so nice first try.
"Good punchline"
You could have made it go a bit more quickly (but don't worry, I used to do that in the past in my previous animations).
"I think the graphics let you down."
Everything else would have been better if the graphics didnt look like scary, scary .bmp files... I did find the story funny, and it was good for a giggle, so for you next flash, i suggest spending some time on the artwork, even if its sketchy it will look pretty cool. Try to establish your own stylem cos it looks a lot like every other flash, go for something new and adventurous, and the community will appreciate it, i would think. Up interactivity by including some notes, a mini-game or development sketches. Cal.