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Wow! Front page! What an honor, thanks NG!
Thanks for all of the great reviews everyone! You're really encouraging me to submit more stuff to Newgrounds, and I look forward to your comments.
This was my first full Flash movie, all visual and audio (minus the music) are original.
Note: "Do Us Part" refers to the phrase "Till death do us part." Hope that clears things up for some.
There are a couple of things you need to add to this.
1. A play button, can't have the movie just start up like that. There needs to be SOME interactivity of the user so they can at least start the movie when they are ready
2. A replay button. The movie just restarted when it was over. Put in some credits, and make a replay button. Its no fun to have the movie loop over and over.
Other than that i thought it was a good movie. The graphics were good, except for a long moment when the screen was black (shorten that up a little bit) it was decent.
Yeah, I'm going to add those things tonight when I've come home from my job. That long moment with the black has sound effects that are supposed to give it a a certain effect, but everyone is welcome to express their opinion. Thanks for the pointers, I'll be adding them in soon as I've mentioned.
This is definitely one of the better serious shorts. You actually manage to express authentic and strong emotion through a flash, which is just amazing! The scene inside the bathroom is so intense...MAN! Very good work indeed!!!
my throat is tightened now...
very sad. Excellent job on the emotion level.
The animation was beautiful. Keep up the good work. You've got talent.
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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