nice
its pretty good, its got the basics,but whats with the disappearing weapons,and no music waz wit dat.....but besides that its a good flash i like no. 4
Author Comments
yey! my first movie that didn't get Blammed, thanks 2 all the people that kept it in! :) I may replace it if i make it longer.
SUPA DUPA
SO MUCH FUN XD
whoa!
it's nice, actually...
umm... i luv it!!
makes me laugh!!
I LOVE ALL THE EPISODES OF TRAPPED!!
YooHoo!!
Keep Rockin!!
same as bezman
i decided to watch this one after i saw no4
Bonzerelie responds:
Kewl. Thanks for the 10! :D
A solid concept.
[Just a quick review as it's old work of yours. You've obviously progressed. The animation and everything are good here, but it's nothing compared to #4. I'm just watching through the series after seeing the last one.]
selected aspects (rated from ----- to +++++)
(note: I'm not rating everything or trying to break the flash up into constituent parts. Just indicating how much each adds to/detracts from my enjoyment of this.)
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+++: An interesting basic concept.
-: disappearing weapons - getting thrown into thin air...
---: I don't like the ending at all. It looks as if he's doing that on purpose, which is stupid.
+++: I like the touches of personality you show through the movement, e.g. after hurting his foot.
---: no music
overall
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It's easy to compare this to the first half of #4 and pick up on all that's yet to be improved. Music made such a difference. Even more personality came across through the animation. The weapons were gotten from somewhere. Various graphic styles were used to spice it up.
But even without those developments, its an idea which intrigues and holds our interest long after the movie has ended.
Bonzerelie responds:
Nice, i respect that you have taken into account, that i have imrpoved :D
1. The weaprons disappearing, was really just because im lazy ;) also, i thought that it would look messy to have the floor cluttered with stuff.
2. I didnt put in musi simply, because i didnt know hoe then :P
3. I didnt think that the affects of personality were such a big deal, but i have been told by alot of people, that they made it more believable, and i guess they were right.
Thanks for all your reviews on the series, i just finished reading them, and they were all the most helpful ones i have evr recieved :D