Score: 4

"hm"

by: MrTiny

date: June 19, 2006

ok, now on to the 4th already..

* better graphics and animations in this one
* Still a lack of a plot
* The various episodes do not inerlink with one another, there is little value in watching them all, i see one and i dont feel the urge to see the next, why? because the next doesnt seem linked, the eagerness to know what happens next which usually keeps people hooked be it in flash books or movies, does not exist within the sleeper. This is simply because each flash is unlinked and lacking sense, the only thing connecting one flash with the next are the characters of which we have no information about at all.

* A question, do you yourself have a actual clue what is oging on in your flashes or do you just randomly improvise and produce episode after episode that way? because thats what it seems like. Much of my previous comments on the previous episodes still apply.

Score: 6

"Different"

by: alefgard

date: February 18, 2006

Well it was strange to watch all the way through the movie. The pictures at the beggining were great and i like how you did the littlefirefly things. It was captivating simply because you had no idea what was going on. If you make a sequel than i would deffinitely explain what is going on and who the people are.

Score: 10

"I vote on what I see and understand of flash----"

by: juzt-a-zinja

date: January 30, 2006

programs.... so I give you a good score! You seem to be really decent at the short end of a story of just pulling something off so it looks great... but I have to agree oher reviewers, you seem to lack the whole picture... at least for this series.... I have yet to view more of your work. (oh yeah, to me Johanna (i hope thats right) is pronounced Yo-Ha-nah, but, thats just me, im a zinja after all)

Score: 5

"I'm not an asshole, don't worry"

by: Pandalyn

date: November 25, 2005

This is nothing like Salad Fingers. Who ever said that has the IQ of a cherry.
Too short. All together this series makes one good lengthed flash cartoon. You seemed to try and make it so weird that you forgot that ALL cartoons need some sort of a plot. You can't just have random animation. The hints of a plot I could see was that he was running from the red eyed thing.
Your drawings are horrid, it looks like a 1st grader was in arts and crafts. A paper cut out monster? Was it supposed to be scarey or funny? If this was humor, then good job, cause I was laughing. If you were going for creepy and weird, why all the bright colors and happy music? It made no sense...
There is a lot of work to be done on this...

And I don't suggest using real drawings and computer drawings... it looks ridiculous.

There. I told you what I didn't like. Sorry if it was harsh, but there you go. Work harder next time.

Score: 10

"Wow dude these sleepr series are pretty awsome!"

by: MirrorMan55

date: September 5, 2005

I enjoy them just as much as all the other big ng series.
good job man!