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1st Flash Movie, 2nd submission. Short movie I made to further my skills in flash. Enjoy :) (If you can't tell, it's a cucumber). I need feedback, do you like the no lines style, or should i try to make a cartoon with lines?
well that was more of a slide show then a flash
the music was awsome yet i dont know the source.
No, its not elivator music it is electronica with IDM type of feel, maybe clasical techno.
Well, random as hell, good graphics. One hint for the sound: I HATE ELEVATOR MUSIC!
you have potential
your animation is decent but ur story was dull. but if you keep at it your bound to make a pretty good flash.
I like the art style, I think you should do more without lines. Pretty good for a 1st Flash. Keep up the good work! ^_^
Not bad, bit boring (spent to long on door sequence) and ending isn't very clear, wtf was that that stabbed the brere?
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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