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Alvin is a random blob with no friends. he is dum as well as green. i love you mum. i love you everyone.
.... Sorry had to say something....
I dont think this animation was up to a standard that you even expected yourself. Im sure you have worked hard on it but there are some things that really made my cursor float over the [x] .
The sound was one of the issues, there was too much "speaking right into the mic", which caused the voices to sound too "ruffled". Some of the graphics seemed to be rushed. In some cases it makes me think that this is more or less rushed however it didn't ruin the style, which was quite original.
I hope you would be able to florish on your animation/drawing skills. And try not to rush since some of the animations that didn't even reach the top 20's took around 1-2 months to create.
That is all.
i started this movie about 2 months after getting flash which is y the sound is bad (crap mic) and why the animation gets better towards the end. it was never my intention to put it on newgrounds but i did because i wanted to see how it would do. thanks anyway though
Oh My Dayz.
What a great movie. Tim, you've dun it again. Love this stuff.
thank you mister zeppelin, i think you are wonderful and would like to know if i can have your babies?
it was weird but i kinda liked it
ok so its completely un related
you know i've noticed something here on newgrounds, if someone reviews a submission, and its not exactly to the authors liking, they come out with reems of abusive coments, i mean please, the point of a review is to voice your OWN OPINION on whatever the movie is. so please artists out there, jus cos u got bad review, dont go shouting WANKER to everyone, listen to what the people are saying, and improve your flash cartoons in the way they say. without them, you have no audience, and thus no cartoons.
rant over. thank you, btw, bice flash, like the drawings, it would be nice to see him from different angles, and more effects such as blood or guts or somat, but other than that, great start.
kk fanx. i have taken note. i might do that next time but my friend started this flash and i finished it, i didn't want to detract from the styyle he had created.
Plz Fix the sound!
You animation was good, and the story was decent, but i could'nt understand half of what you were saying. From what i could tell it sounded like you were making the story up as you went along. Im not sure if you had a script or not but its an idea. Over all your flash was better than average.
well done there, i was done as we went along, my friend Chris made it all up on the spot.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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