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05-02-05 – 04-26-11

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SilverRealmSilverRealm

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

You ma hero!

Start making another one! Move iT :P


The-Ass-ClownThe-Ass-Clown

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome

They keep getting better and better. Keep it up!!! Animation still isn't terrible... You should just work on the sound and animations a tad bit, then they will absolutely rock.


Amazingsaiyan0Amazingsaiyan0

Rated 5 / 5 stars

THE DAX PWNS!

Great and funny movie everyone needs to vote 5!


l2-ushxxxl2-ushxxx

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Wow!

Dude...this can be Frontpage material...but i'm not sure but probably!


Brilliant-RembrandtBrilliant-Rembrandt

Rated 5 / 5 stars

longer than shit but...

its longer than shit but id had me rollin' bravo.


Raziel2005Raziel2005

Rated 4 / 5 stars

nice work

nicely done. funny and creative. keep up the good work.


PotuPotu

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

LOL!

that was pretty funny man. You're right, it was a lot better than the other two.

"Your job...... IS TO DANCE!!!!!"

(six flags music)

good job man keep em comin :D (since this came directly after the second one it could like be here in two secs)


CubeBoxStationCubeBoxStation

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Way better than the first!

This is a nicely done flash, and more funnier and creative than the first! Hope to see more of this series! :)


Dcstegg228Dcstegg228

Rated 5 / 5 stars

must get song!!!!

whats that song called? you know the one in the begining on the menu


ElCapEtanElCapEtan

Rated 4 / 5 stars

wtf roflmao

haah awesome haha well those are weird movies but kool non the less


JackMcMacJackMcMac

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Front page

This series will make the front page. I was preferring the second one to this until the last scene. That last line was hilarious.


LgdVegettoLgdVegetto

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Keep em' coming man!

Well done :) .. indeed this series is seriously becomin' a big hit now! Keep up the excellent work, and good luck to the future eps later on.


chibilunargirlchibilunargirl

Rated 5 / 5 stars

W00T!! Best Ski Lift Pals series!! ^o^

I love the part when you threw the Mario sprite in there as part of the chase!! Everything else was great!! Keep it up!!


BashhBashh

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Where's the funny?

I want five minutes of my life back; I really don't see how any of you guys can rate this more than a three or a four, sure the animation itself isn't bad but the story is horible, the jokes are lame and have no tact... ._.


N4S2YN4S2Y

Rated 2 / 5 stars

OMG

Dude i waited so long for that to be funny but it never came.


razzy2razzy2

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Well that pretty much owned

That owned and you own! This has gotta get front page!


ilikepie12345ilikepie12345

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow

1 word. Wow.


Nine-ElevenNine-Eleven

Rated 4 / 5 stars

funny new series

I've been following this series since...uh...2 days ago. You've got some good characters going on, keep it up. Everyone except that random toilet guy that is, what the hell was up with that??


killergp123killergp123

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice job

The overall presentation of making it look like a DVD is an awesome addition, when watching the extras, the button "The Original" didn't do anything. But the rest of the buttons worked excellent.


TheSaladCaperTheSaladCaper

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Bonus Stage ripoff? Very.

And I don't even like bonus stage. You fail in every aspect.


Kratos-God-of-WarKratos-God-of-War

Rated 0 / 5 stars

!

Ok don't even think of making flash until you grow more than one pussy hair.
You sound like some little midget gnome that just had his pussy waxed.

Go play more gay kiddy nintendo games on your gaycube or go watch gay kiddy pokemon.

And pathetic 3d text auto shape in 3dsmax impress no one.

Ok go away now, adults have to watch decent flash now.


atticus9878atticus9878

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome!

Wow fabulous flick. I loved how he kept getting promortions! Hilarious. All my 5 woot belong to here!!!!


messypmessyp

Rated 3 / 5 stars

damn you

damn you to the eternal fires of hell for using venga boys music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nah apart from that cheesy annoying sinful tune you used i quite likes this. the graphics were quite a bit odd but that gives you your own unique style

I demand you resubmit with less cheesy music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well done


KcelticKceltic

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not much

Your animation was sub par and your sound quality and jokes were rather lame. Some advice, when your recording with a microphone edit out the part when it is turned on and off.


dont-blm-meeee1dont-blm-meeee1

Rated 0 / 5 stars

may god have mercy on your soul

Bonus Stage ripoff all the way. Character designs, lip animation, dialogue, it was all like watching a crumby ripoff of Bonus Stage with horrible voice acting.


mjnoir1mjnoir1

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Bonus stage.

this is clearly a bonus stage ripoff. it might be ok, if it was funny.


HeadSkimHeadSkim

Rated 5 / 5 stars

ahahahahahhahaha

Ice cream shack? More like ice cream stupid! hahahahahahahahahahaa, thats rich.

Good job.


NikoAnestiNikoAnesti

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

I've seen ripoffs, but this is freaking ridiculous

Why don't you just make a Bonus Stage episode? Because that's basically what this is, without the humor, or skill in Flash. You can't possibly say to me that you thought this up without having ever seen Bonus Stage. the character designs are almost exactly like BS's and the "lip-synch" is almost the same as well. I'm at a loss for words here. I would give you advice on being, let's see...original, but there's no hope in that. Not after this.


GoblinboyGoblinboy

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

RIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPOOOOOOFFFFFFF

Dear lord. The guy who gets the job is CLEARLY a lame Joel impersonation, and the other guy is Phil. The guy who "PWNS the N00bs" is Friend. Not to mention you probably went FBF through a Bonus Stage to get your lipsync sketches. Throw in the music that grates my ears to raw meat and the horrifically slow pace and lame jokes and you have a STINKER.

-Goblinboy


AlbinoNinjaAlbinoNinja

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I Signed Up for Newgrounds Just to Tell U U Suck

Awful, awful piece of shit. I saw this, almost went deaf from the voices, and decided to read the reviews just to laugh at how many people gave you 1s. Somehow, I see a page of POSITIVE reviews!?! Not only is this a rip off of Bonus Stage (the idiotic comebacks following a long dialogue, otherwise known by many as Joel-isms) but with much much worse voices, but the animation is simply full of dumb special effects. You've managed to kill the slightly funny guy dancing with a mop in less than 3 minutes... impressive. I believe the music sums up this cartoon best: overused, unoriginal, and annoying

Before you know it, Commander Keen's gonna sue your ass.


The-Hat-ManThe-Hat-Man

Rated 0 / 5 stars

If Matt Wilson was died, he would haunt you.

at the risk of sounding like a "copy-cat" (i didn't have a better term to use) I agree with my predecessor(s) in saying that you totally ripped off Bonus Stage. You have the blonde idiot who talks, looks and acts like a moron, and his moody sidekick who he mooches off of. Even the mouth cycles for the speech were total rip-offs of BS. THe only difference is that Bonus stage is way better in animation and humor, and the voice acting doesn't make we want to kill myself.


LittleKaideLittleKaide

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Well Fuck You

And fuck the people who gave this a high enough score to boost it to a 3.46
I closed it in the middle, I couldn't take it anymore.
You're a fucking hack.


SirLemmingSirLemming

Rated 1 / 5 stars

A long, boring ripoff.

This show is undeniably and very clearly is a rip-off of Bonus Stage. You need to find your own style, and if you can't just stop making cartoons. I'm serious about that.

The whole first scene with the interaction between the blonde-haired guy and the brown-haired guy was a VERY obvious attempt at Joel & Phil interaction. And then basically everything the blonde guy did after that was poor and obvious Joel imitation.

In short... I wonder how Matt Wilson feels about being thanked in the credits.


spadez1spadez1

Rated 0 / 5 stars

RIPOFF 101! WANNABE'S IN A CAN!

Dude. Get your own style. STOP RIPPING OFF BONUS STAGE. Or stop cartooning.


Sunny-FSSunny-FS

Rated 0 / 5 stars

STILL a Bonus Stage ripoff.

Are you a fucking retard? I thought this episode would actually have you STOP using Matt Wilson's mouths AND humor and manage to create your own series... BUT YOU DIDN'T! The voice acting was fucking terrible since you tried to hard to immitate Bonus Stage's voice acting and the humor was so dry it was peeling off the Flash. Also, just when I thought it couldn't get any worse, you attempt to shove in a scooby-doo scene with the random doors. The graphics were awful.

"Good job" you mother fucking ripoff. How this piece of shit got such a high score is mindboggling. Why this even passed judgment is mindboggling, too!


BullShitpoliticiansBullShitpoliticians

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad, a bit too close to Bonus stage but whatvr

Seriously, this isn't so much of a direct rip off as people think, I'll admit, I know the guy is incredibly influenced by Matt wilson, but this isn't rip off material. A rip off would be like Dax taking a script from matt wilson, for like teh original episode of Bonus stage 9, cube, and doing it with his characters. This is painfully similar, but it's not going as far as stealing things from him. Believe me, if I thought it was stealing I'd say it was, I've been watching bonus stage since episode 8, a year ago, I know this shit, and this guy. I was also around for the first rip offs, they were badly animated and badly scripted, thats why it was bad too me.

Next thing, Bonus stage lovers, leave this alone, if you care so much about matt's work, buy his shirt, or donate, yelling at someone for making an animation for free isn't erally supporting him, when I doubt Matt gives a flying FUCK about it.

Dax, I don't think anybody will accept anything you put out here, the only way they may like it is if you do real animating, instead of circles (which I doubt matt wilson created, or owns rights too.)

Personally I don't think it's very funny, it's got some ok humor, but it's not as special as some shows could be. Keep working on it.


SPRSPR

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I'm sorry but that was bad.

This movie was the worst most blatant Bonus Stage ripoff I have ever seen. You've been asking "How is this a Bonus Stage ripoff" on your comments for the reviews that say that, well first off, your characters look almost exactly like his Characters do, as do the mouth movements, secondly you need to stop trying to imitate Matt's humor. All of the humor in this seems a lot like that of Bonus Stage. Third, your character's personalities seem to mimic those of the ones in Bonus Stage. Try to improve and make a style all your own.

I want my 7 minutes back. plzkthx


blakehblakeh

Rated 1 / 5 stars

BSers, Go Away

First off, this cartoon is cute at best. It shows that you have potential to make some great flash, but you still have quite a bit of work to do before that happens. Work on the humor, since most of it seems to be at a 11 year old's level.

Secondly, Bonus Stage harpies, go away. It's obvious that you all like to bash people in an attempt to make yourselves feel better, but keep that crap in your own backyard. These aren't the BS forums.


NES-dudeNES-dude

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good but unoriginal.

It was pretty funny but the thing is, the chracers are like the characters from bonusstage and south park. I think you did a good job with making the flash but you seriously need to make characters with their own personallities. 6/10 for me. But please for the next cartoons, try to think originally instead of making Shawn, Joel, and Jack, Phil.


SodaPopinskiSodaPopinski

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Why, God, why?!?!?

Congradulations. You not only ripped off TWO properties, but you made a GREAT flash artist Niko Anesti lose all hope in webtoons. I hope you die a horrible death along with this in flash hell.


MKALINEMKALINE

Rated 0 / 5 stars

It sucks. No really.

This sucked. It ripped off Bonus Stage. And you ran that crap site Fireballworld, ripping off Randy Solem. How dare you mock the greatest Flash movie franchises. I hope this gets blammed


HeatwizardHeatwizard

Rated 0 / 5 stars

a failed ripoff

In a nutshell, here's what happened with this.
This Dax guy obviously tried to ripoff Bonus Stage, and failed miserably.
Save yourself 3 minutes of your life, rate this zero, and move on.


AshfordPrideAshfordPride

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Ever hear of Bonus Stage?

Well, althought the "odd couple" formula is used in many cartoons, these characters are clearly rip-offs of Joel and Phil from Bonus Stage (Among others).


DrJamDrJam

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nice

HAHA! Thats was great. The Graphics is not all that but thats what makes it funny. Keep the random stuff in it and make more!


Neo-EgyptianNeo-Egyptian

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Heap of shit

Everyone with sense has reviewed this saying something along the lines of "this is completely ripping of Bonus Stage". They are not wrong. I don't care you have tried - badly - to justify that it's actually just similar to BS and not actually copying it, there are so many similarities between this and BS that you simply can't defend it.

The first scene is a perfect example. The 'comic' timing you've used for the bits about getting a job, and using the guy with the brown hair's money to get a TV, is unbelievably derivative of the first BS episode, Car (when Joel is going on about 'I have a car').

I was going to list off some other blatantly stolen BS bits, but thinking about it, this is doing Matt Wilson's cartoon a diservice - whereas his cartoon was original, funny, and well thought-out, yours is a heap of shit. The jokes - even when they're not badly attemping to rip-off BS - are rubbish, the sound-quality is STILL piss-poor 3 episodes into the series, and pretty much everything is tired and predictable. I mean seriously, you used a Benny Hill sequence. And that "I'm not getting a job" joke was built up beyond belief.

So yeah, perhaps this review has missed the boat by about a year, but your series was crap then, and it's even worse now.

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3.37 / 5.00