Needs Improvement
It was alright and unlike many things i've seen on ng, but I found it to be a little light on humor and going the pace of a lullaby. Try to give it a little more pizzazz :)
Author Comments
I had planned to put sound in this flash, but after watching with the music playing, I decided to leave it. If no one likes it, I'll try again with sound effects instead. Enjoy!
First effort fantastic
I thought it was very original, and i never gave a good score for music coz i couldn't hear it, don't know why, mayb it won't reach oz. And it's not the speakers coz i have yours on this comp. Speak to you soon. And don't forget to call Nanna.
nice
decent flash. I like the music, personally. Good usage of it. Though the way you looped it could have been better. keep it up!
you kept my attention...
which is good, but the the ending is dissatisfying. at least it didn't blow ass like everything else on this site.
Serious...yet funny
Good movie- I especially liked the part with the bird...Perhaps it's just me, but maybe it could have been made with the impression of 'further awayness'? Still good anyway...
