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Flash I worked on with a bunch of crazy new ideas. could prolly improve on a few of them, but tell me what you think anyway. =P
it wan't that bad.
it's just im tired and bored... iv'e seen 70 billion shitty flashes tonight and i won't take it out on you. im in a bad mood though,, graphics were good... i liked them,the only problem was it was too short and i am grumpy therefore it angered me, : ( but it waas a decent flash good job! thumbs up.. im going to bed now, bye.
i wasn't in credits, ass??
common now us artists gotta stick together gotta keep our school in line with our talents. try harder dammit JESUS CHRIST crioky. have backround music also. if you do part two actually have fighting =P no leaving people in drama all the time trust me thats not what people want to see these days
hey now thats just uncalled for =P. if i ever finish joshs flash ill put you in, perhaps. and yes, im aware that this flash is pretty bad, but its on the portal so burn XD but yea, other than that, i demand we get josh to do a flash and make a collab. its pretty much instant portal anyway...haha, anyways..
-the one who owns you
Good..: 1) Decent drawings
Bad.. : 1) NO SOUND OMFG ADD MORE
2) I LOVE KRISTY YUN!!! =D.. lol sorry, i really do =]
3) the sounds you DID use were LIGHTSABERS.. CMON MAn, DOWNLOAD AIM AND IM ME, ILL PERSONALLY HAND YOU SOME DRAGON BALL Z SOUNDS I HAVE.
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Don't make a part 2.
Not so bad
Well , your storyline is just missing here.
It's a good start , well , youv'e menaged to use your voice to make the sound , instead of using computer voice , and that's good.
The bad are the event in the fight, it was sorta boring to watch. Make it more interesting next time , i don't think it's so exiting to see that guy go up in the sky , and then like , ''WTF? i am not dead''
The end could have ben better you know :/
And ps , next time , give music credit. <<Legend of zelda orcarina of time>>....
thanks, even i myself knew it wasnt that great of a job. but thx for the review and i guess ill try harder on sumtin else =S
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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