Score: 7
"Not bad..."
date: November 11, 2008
You shouldn't be so hard on yourself, it wasn't bad, it just needed a little bit more effort, especially in the animation department, (Although at the risk of being politically incorrect, this might be fine for an Animutation) I felt, the idea was there, it needed to be "more entertaining"
What I mean by that is, some of the ideas kind of cycled through (Not just at the refrain) and mixing it up a bit despite the context, I think would help raise the score a bit.
I'm not trying so say it was horrible, I'm just trying to speculate what would benefit you to get a better score in the future, and mind you, I have very little I can judge without being judged (I've never done a flash movie before, so it's difficult to say what is best)
Anyways, if you really feel its not funny, just try again, what's the worse that could happen? People don't like it again? Nothing ventured, nothing gained!