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Submitted: 04/20/2005 | 10:43AM EST

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Current Score: 2.10 / 5.00

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My first flash be nice

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Average Score: 6.2 / 10

Score: 4
AnacondaHL

"a list"

date: April 21, 2005

of things that you should not do for your next flash:

1) NOT ENTITLE IT "MY FIRST FLASH". Seriously, you people learn so slow. Infact, I suggest you rename it now.
2) Preloader. Newgrounds gives you a free one, if you happen to do the next...
3) Actually read the NG tutorial section. you can dl the preloader and get great tips.
4) Replay button.
5) A less-abrupt ending.
6) Don't ask for pity in the author's comments. Grow some fucking balls. You're an artist now, the criticism shall floweth, and it will whether you're ready or not.

Have fun.
-AnacondaHL

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Score: 6
Molotov

"not bad,not bad at all"

date: April 21, 2005

i like your style of animation,i was thinking at 1st this was gonna suck ass cause its called "my frist flash" but this was really good,great job dude ^_^

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Score: 6
Theodus

"Great for a first Flash"

date: April 20, 2005

NONE of my first Flashes were ever this good. My current ones aren't this good yet. And that's the truth. Good work, man. Keep at it! This was good, but I'm sure you could do better given time and practice!

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Score: 3
Lan-15

"Good it was good...."

by: Lan-15
date: April 20, 2005

If you were a pro flash artist I would probaly blam you but since you just got flash probaly like a week ago I would say it was good it didnt really make sence but oh well it was good next time try harder and it will probaly be bettter!Hint dont use stick men unless it's a kick ass flash

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MovieWatcher2233

"like i care. . ."

date: April 20, 2005

i dont care if its your SO CALLED FIRE FLASH it still sucked and i don't really give a shit rather it was or not. it still sucked... you really need some help with your (sucky) flashes.

P.S. you spelled first wrong loser!

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