Score: 9

"It getting better."

by: SleepyEyed

date: March 22, 2009

It's not choppy anymore. Now, the content:

Voice acting could be a bit more flowy/ dramatized/ etc. Right now it seems superficial and a bit clichéd ("..Excellent..." - the imposter friar).

I feel like I'm eight-years old again (how I wish to be once more) watching Pokémon or something. I knew didn't know where the story was going 'cause I was an idiot; now, I'm not. Let's pump up the unpredicticality a bit, man. This looks like it can be an epic.

I see a lot of potential and I wait for Chapter 3.

Score: 10

"is awesome"

by: aldlv

date: January 17, 2009

i like it pretty much... the graphics were better in this chapter, specially the statue of the girl... the graphics and design of her was absolutely awesome
the story was cool, i like how you show the bad guy
wasn't boring this time, it was great

Score: 7

"Better."

by: AnimeRulz4Eva

date: November 23, 2008

The first chapter left a lot to be desired storywise (although that can be attributed to the file size limit and is not neccessarily the artist's fault). This chapter was much more interesting than the first. Both the character development and the storyline were built-up more, and the animation was exceptional just like the first one. If the rest of the series continues to improve then I would be willing to vote higher.
All-in-all it was a good flash.

Score: 10

"Cool"

by: Frox1k

date: July 6, 2008

Awesome.Once again nothing fails.Good graphics,awesome sound,exelent story line.

Score: 10

"wow"

by: littlegoblet

date: June 22, 2008

I am so inspired by your lovely artwork and animation. you have a lovely drawing style. I hope you and other good artist would give us a tutorial on how you animate. but in the mean time keep up the great work.