Okay, im reposting this because the sound was horrible when i submitted it recently. Everything is the same, I took most of your advice. I can only do so much to please everyone, im not god, or consider myself a great flash artist, im a student and learning, some people posted earlier that the drawings suck, etc, try it yourself, while flashes of stick figures get front page on newgrounds im here trying to push great drawings out on newgrounds. I also redid the voices, I dont know many people who can voice act for me so i had to do like 5 voices in this, i know some of the voices sound choppy but im new to voice recordings, i really tried this time to make it sound good. Sorry if you dont like it.
edit - i know this may sound like just another story like final fantasy, or legend of zelda, but give me time to tell my story before you judge it on story. The story itself is a diverse complexed one and is different, i promise you that.