Score: 6
"I didn't know you had a collab!"
date: May 24, 2006
~The good~
I will put everyone's review individually, since your flashes were pretty different, though about the same story.
Mr. GilClock- You had a nice introduction with pretty nice animation of strawberry playing the guitar. Strawberry didn't actually move, but you made it seem like he did by moving his hands on the guitar. The song that was started was done very well, almost touching even.
RastaClock- Your animation wasn't horrible, and you had/ Your's also went with the music quite well, and had a good body of the story.
Mr. Flash (Is that YOU!?)- Probobly had the best overall animation, just seems the most cleatr, and the most movement. you also had the longer part of the other three. It concluded the story, and completed the song. You ended it sadly, but it was start very good
~The bad~
Once again, the bad for all three seperately.
Mr_gilClock- It seemed like you got a little lazy with the very limited animation, only Strawberry clock's hands moved, after all! Your part was also kind of short, could've contributed a little more to the overall flash.
RastaClock- You probobly had the worst animation of the three, your part of the story also didn't fit into Flash's one, and was the shortest of the three. you should've definetely contributed more to it.
FlashClock (BBQ?)- It was the longest, it seems like you took all the work for yourself and didn't leave anything for the other two guys. Your's also didn't form a transition with the second one, it's as if you just started another completely different story after rastaClock's flash finished.
This whole collab was actually pretty short, a normal collab would be a whole three or more minute song, this one only had one part per animator and still weren't that impressive.
Overall, an okay collab with a very well done song. The best, in my opinion, is FlashClock's animation, followed by Mr-gilclock's, following last is RastaClock. I hope this review was helpful!
3/5
Author's Response:
Yeas Flashclock is i the bbqbeefburgerman.
Thank you for critism.
