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this is my first flash and i realy liked the song ......... enjoy

(i hope so)

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not too bad, the song was awesome, but the animation itself was a bit too random and could've used more color too.

LOVE IT ^_^

OMG I LOVE WHITE STRIPES THEY ARE SO KICK ASS !!!! -stops being all groupieish girly- ahem...yea great work man if you need a few ideas on how to impove it lemme know i think i could help you out...tho im still figuring out flash my self heh but hey i can be the idea person ^_^; but yea great work just needs a bit of touching up

A-Idiot responds:

thx for the response dude. i like your affor , let me know if yo have any ideas

needs work.

the idea for this is all well and good, but you could have easily done a better job with it.
the graphics all up were too simplistic for me, and i didnt enjoy looking at them for the duration of the movie. you really, really needed to make some backgrounds, even if they only consisted of maybe 2 colours, they just would have made the animation a whole lot more to look at.
the song was pretty good, and a nice choice, but your style of animation wasnt fast enough to keep up with the somewhat rapid song... you need to find a song with a pace that suits your animation speed.
overall, a good idea, but execution needs work.
5/10
(THE THUMB: sideways)

eh¿

well, ya definitely have skills with flash, but fine tune it, juice it up a little, and next time, ya could get a much better score

Definate Potential

Yup, definate potential - I'd keep the black and white animation going, it's a nice idea, but there needs to be more detail I think. (for example, bodies on the two singing heads, mouths fitting the words, etc.). I didn't like the random deaths though...bit...erm...random.

Nice effort though. Ta!

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Apr 10, 2005
10:32 AM EDT