Score: 6
"Not Bad"
date: April 18, 2005
I must say the Flash ability at DHC has improved 5-fold since I first saw some of your stuff almost a year ago. This movie was OK. The beginning was pretty funny, but after a while it did get tedious. It was pretty obvious you were trying to be funny in the end.
Graphics were OK. I see you used a seperate movie clip symbol for mouth movements. The Super Flash Bros. have an awesome tutorial on their site that details how to do lip syncing effectively. I'd check it out.
Style. It was a lot like a school lecture, which I guess is what you were trying to obtain. I don't like school, and I don't lectures. There are several other school project Flashes that aren't lectures, try that style next time.
Sound was clear, the mic did make that annoying static sound occasionally when air hit it (usually when John spoke), try covering it with a thin cloth to prevent this.
Not much in the way of violence, why is that even a review criteria?
Humor. Again, it seemed a little strained at the end. In the beginning it seemed smoothe, but most of your jokes were sophmoric. (At least that's what my underwear says)
Overall, I'll give you guys a 6/10. Keep improving, I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Heh. John came up with the underwear joke. It's the only joke he wrote himself.
