Score: 8
"Not the greatest, but full of effort"
date: June 27, 2005
looks like much effort was put into this. Character development, animation, voices, everything. Of course there many flaws in this cartoon.
Graphics - very well done cartoon graphics but it needed more movement. Make things go along faster, to keep the viewer interested.
style - you have a nice cast full of characters and voices, it had syle. But you should add more characters such as the teachers, bullys, other people to build some plot then just a bunch of people acting stoopid.
sound - the sound was fine, but for a cartoon, you need to reaaaaly dramitize the voices. Make their voices dramatic and exciting, these were sort of dull.
violence - not much in the cartoon other then the knife throwing. It wouldn't hurt to add some.
Humor - there was quite of bit of humor in this, but there needs to be more. Like I was saying for voices, make it more dramatic. Put random expressions on their faces at all times. Make some real crazy faces to really make this cartoon far more interesting.
This has a LOT of potential and I'm sure the next episode will be better.
