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This is my second flash it has better animation and a story line. Like my last one I would like it if you gave my constructive criticism. Enjoy!
Yeahh that was pretty funny i can see you doing well in the future if you keep at it
Short yet funny, good job
I thought that though it was short, it was very good. Great job.
it was alright, but it was a bit too short. this would've been better and could've had more potential if it was longer.
It was cute. Once I got a hang of what you're referring to (with the flash of Adultery the text had some context). This is a playful idea that could have been a lot funnier if it was taken "over-the-top" with dramatics. Having ridiculously dramatic music in the background, showing a very upset woman, a guilty looking man, maybe replacing the text with audio if you've got some voice talent (if not, don't bother). More time spent focusing on the cinematography can take a small concept and make it really work for you.
Brilliant Short Movie Classic...
That was brillaint, better animations, and good style. I think it was goos espically the ending. Keep It Up
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