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this is my 1st try at flash. Hope you enjoy it, it's a story I'v had in mind ever since I joined the service.
I liked it I cant wait to see your next work!
Had to take a road trip this weekend, but I am going to make a series out of this. I already have a comic drawn for it. Just making it into a movie. Glad you liked the intro.
finish it man!!!
hah, im sure this will make a great movie if you would only finish it...
the style of animation is great, and i loved all of the 'superheroes' movements, haha. the concept is also really original, and i loved the voice acting. seriously, finish this mofo, its great!
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Thanks a LOAD for you input! More of it CUMMIN your way. The animation wasn't too HARD, and it was and will be a WAD of fun to do. Thanks for the review.
No Preloader, no Play Button, No Stop Function at the End of the Movie.. nice Graphics though..
You should Remade this one and make a series out of it.. If you need help go to the ng forum or ask me (I know.. my flash's aren't that good if it depends on graphics and so on.. but at least I have preloaders and buttons *mwehehe* *cough*)
Keep on ;)
Yeah, not buttons. I havn't learned that much. alot of the animation in there is frame by frame, not very good with tweening yet, but I was getting the hang of it toward the end of the intro. I'll get on minimizing the size of the file and finish it all on one movie.
Are you sure this is your first flash?
The graphics were really good for a first timer. You got some talent. As the story, i say that this is more of like a trailer. It like went for a short amount of time. You could make a good series out of this. Lots of dirty jokes and stuff. Keep em comin. Ha! Comin.
It is my 1st flash. Matt Shelly (Andventures of Billy Ray) taught me alot about flash and REALLY hooked me up. after he showed me how to scan in pictures it was game on!
it didn't really seem finished...alotta ppl would get blammed for that, but i hope this one doesn't! i love the idea, just carry it a little further, and you'd really have something here. good luck!
Thanks for not blamming me! It is just an intro to see people's reaction. Make sure it was worth my while. so far so good I think.
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