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making a movie part1

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Sorry for any spelling mistakes
This is one of my best movies done
and also one of my first

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i loved it

you took stick animation to a whole new level. that was hilarios and that ending was the work of brilliants. i hve some notes though . if you ever have a sequel or redo this these are the notes i have. put more accident death defiant tricks in. like ten or so. if you have that many the ending will be amplified by alot. also i think the newgrounds people would like it better if you did actual animation not just stick figures. maybe add another author to help you with this. im giving you a 5 out of 5 because i loved the whole concept of this video. also if you have any comments on my review. i love hearing from people ive reviewd. good job

Gd start

i no how hard flash is and this is pretty gd apart from u should use voices instead of text and plus ur spelling spoils it a lot

Haha

I loved the concept! But you shouldn't use sticks

:o OMG I <3 sticks :D :D :D <3

I saw wannabe Xiao Xiao sticks & I thought "oh no, Xiao Xiao annoys me & I hate Xiao Xiao rip offs even more, this is going to be awful," but I was wrong. For one of your first animations this is great.

Humor, graphics, animations, & action are all good, but refine the sounds a bit to make them less annoying, ditch the voice overs all together because sticks don't need any goddamn voices, correct the spelling & you have a gem.

That was pretty good

I suggest that you should use some voicework and correct some spelling. Also the ambient noises can get a little bit annoying. Either than that it was pretty good

Keep up the good work

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Mar 27, 2005
1:19 AM EST