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I didn't expect to finish this so quickly, well I was working untill 2am every night :S lol, enjoy the second episode to Majin Vegetto.
I like this one but your last one was better.
Thanks, im glad you liked them both:)
You're getting a lot better man, glad too see you improved off of the first one. But yet again, I have some suggestions:
1. Don't worry about releasing them fast, just make them longer and you will get higher scores.
2. Try to put more story into it, try not to make pure fighting (although that is cool)
3. Finally, and I have to put this in cuz it annoyed the crap out of me, watch about getting sloppy towards the end, like Majin Vegeto's nose looked like shit ha ha ha. Just stay strong until the end and keep the same qualitly that you've been showing go all the way through.
Other than that, much better than the first and I look forward to seeing how you grow as a flash artist. Kepp it up!
Thanks for the review man:D, i'll try make the movie longer next time, and i'll try make a plot for it, i know people have been saying it doesnt make sense, and lol XD, i didnt notice about the nose, and i will keep the quality of the animation the same:)
This is a great movie, Alot of time obviously went into this and people should have more respect for how hard it is to do frame by frame animation like this traced or not its still very time consuming I would know Iv'e been working on an action flash thats taken me damn near forever and parts still don't look quite right.
Only pay attention to the positive and constructive feedback. Good job!
Thanks man:D just to let everyone know i dont do any tracing at all, i mean they can belive it if they want to but there wrong. thanks for the review anyway:D
OK....what was this?
A tribute? A practice in flash? There was no plot in here.
The drawings....dude...ur copying it directly from Akira Toriyama and you cant draw it well enough anyway.
MORE SFX please
Thanks for the review, i said before that i explained it on the authirs comment on the first episode
Don't let anybody tell you that it sucked. Drawing full animations with this much accuracy (it's not perfect, but it's far from bad) is a lot harder than bobbing gifs around on the screen. If you want to considered one of the greats here, though, all you have to do is spend more time on it. Make everything tighter, more frames, more attention to character detail, establish a mode (which would be a lot better than what FUNimation did when they were doing DBZ for America....ugh, terrible painting)... and yeah, better Ki effects (all of this just goes back to spending more time on it) and you'll get straight 5's and 10's. When Cajun said your Ki effects "sucked", I think he was probably just refering to the Ka-Me-Ha-Me-Ha. You know what a real one looks like. I think you just copped out and wanted to be finished with it, so you didn't take the time. ^_^
Thanks for the review, its true i should of taken more time with it, some of the areas were a little sketchy and the ki effects are bad, hopefully the 3rd episode should look better:D
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