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thanks for the comments I tweeked the sound and hopefully told a more complete story, getting there, getting there
Even though i didnt understand about the whole cat thing. (was he hired to catch it or wat?). I liked the plot of the video about him and wat he has to do. Keep up the good work.
The cat got to do with it?
This could grow to be something very amazing
I really enjoyed this... even though it wasn't much of a plot it was kinda like making it make sense by yourself rather than the author totally making it show what the heck is going on. The animation was very orginal and grand in that way. I figure if you continue to do this series it would be cool to follow the boy in other aspects of his life. Love sadness death... wierd randomness whatever as long as its entertaing. Keep on improving and being orginal.
First off, Beautiful animation. Not just beautiful, though, it was drawn very well in a very uncommon style, which is always good for bonus points. The one sticking point, however, was the story. I just cannot figure out what the film is about. If you could enlighten me as to the topic, I would very much appreciate it.
hmm I tried to add some dialogue to make it make sense but it was just exposition, which kills the story,
the plot is a day in the life, this kid has a job and he has to do weird things to keep it.
so eventually the animation itself will tell the story but until then Im just going to continue to do my thing.
I really dont finish many stories so I lack experiance in that area, meh :)
Your graphics, style and backgrounds are superb, but what I find with alot of flash artists is that they lack sound effects, that add that extra feeling, realism to a cartoon. Also it looks like it's following a story but you need something to reinforce what the viewer thinks is happening, like a front blurb or some voice acting. I think this could have been a 7+ with a little sound and an explanation.
well I added a decent music track to it and reiforced the story eith a second title, seems to be better now
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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