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my first animation
I love it!!!
this is great for your first thing
One of the best noir flashs ive seen, great use of music (portihead couldnt of been a better choice). Very smooth animation
great job, even down to the movement of the bracelet
Nailed by a chick lol.
I liked it, bit short. The animation while he was walking up the stairs looked weird. Good choices of music except you didn't put stops in, all three track overlapped on mine and kept going. So really these are just technical hitches I'm dropping the score on. I've seen Kong so I know you're a good animator though.
I enjoyed the facial art of the characters very much, however, the animation was a bit choppy (however, given this was your first flash, and you've undoubtedly improved since :D ). The story felt abit detatched. Man investigates. Finds the cause- but then??? You know. Just kinda a cliffhanger, but not the enjoyable kind. Overall was pretty well done.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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