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my first animation
Good choice of music
For me, the music made this animation. There is nothing much of a story here, and the script isn't up to much. It looks like a first animation and while I did like what you were trying to do, it was obvious. There were parts that seemed to drag on - watching a poor tween make it's way across the screen takes it's toll.
Stylish, but pointless
The style, the artwork, and the music set the mood for a good noir. But there was little to no story. A nameless guy walks into a building, finds dead body, gets shot. The End. Again, the style was great, but it needed a story.
That was great for a first flash. But it left a lot to be desired. Who was the man and why would he go in the house? Is there going to be a second movie? That would be great. Nice job man, Keep up the good work.
this is a great movie. In fact, I can't believe it's your first. my favorite part was the music. what's the name of the track playing in the background? it's a great flash.
Familer but new.
Very James Bondish.
Fernando's side project interferes with Gooseman's plans for the business.
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