Score: 7
"Much better than The Sleeper series!!"
date: November 25, 2005
I love how you did this one in mostly paper. The ? and ! over his head was a little unnecessary. You don't have to spell things out for your viewers, we aren't that stupid. With music and animation you can tell us his mood. The lines that signify noise... that was unnecessary too.
I was creeped out during the beginning, when the furniture came alive I laughed, and I laughed even harder at the knife scene. The computer done blood? That was hilarious, you should have just coloured over your pictures with a red pen for better affect.
Not bad though, not bad at all.
Author's Response:
umm lol thanks for the good and interesting review!
