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Mar 14, 2005 | 8:56 PM EST

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Finally! The third chapter of Altereality is here! You will finally find out how that kid got to that strange Hell-like world. Well, sorta. Anyway, enjoy!

This is my longest running cartoon yet. Special thanks goes out to Isca and Kagome of the NG Voice Acting Club! Thanks girls! Couldn't have done it without you!

And yes, that is Mario that Marshall is playing. Had to get some of my gaming love in there.

Dedicated to Alie. :)

Reviews


ninjamonkeyninjamonkey

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

man im sorry to agree with everyone else but

you kind of failed in the dramatics area. i sort of kind of laughed at some parts. i mean, the series itself seems pretty good, but this is just cheesily dramatic. good music choices though.



dogmatron666dogmatron666

Rated 3 / 5 stars

LMAO!

I agree with fateskeeper, too much of this movie was unintentionally hilarious. Sorry, I couldn't stop from cracking up at certain points!



fateskeeperfateskeeper

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Idk... wtf

I know you went for dramatic, but it turned out, for me at least, to be extremely humerous because it was so spontaneous! Things happened way to quickly, like his dad deciding to tell him hes adopted out of no were, his automatic transformation to a "rebel", and his spazms and shit or whatever they were. When you showed the 2 years after part it just kinda seemed like his mother had been crying for that long. Like it was a daily thing that she sulked and said thing s like "oh, we never should have told him". hey this is a great idea and the voices wer great too, just work on the drama and try not to be repetitive with the animations and Im sure your flashes will be great. It just takes time.


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frozenBladefrozenBlade

Rated 3 / 5 stars

its ok

this is ok and all wit great voices, but it'd be better if your characters' faces and bodies were... ...um.... .....consistant.

great job though. sort of a whole Superman feeling to it.



CaptainMcMuffinCaptainMcMuffin

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Good point, but not interested...

I really appreciate the effort and the quality audio, but I'm not interested. I found the story uninspired and the art was just too average. Despite the fact that I just didn't like it, I think you should keep trying, because you do have potential. :)


MarcusRaven responds:

Wow...well, way to politely bash. Try making your own. It isn't easy! I've had this story in the works for over two years, and it still is changing. It gets better.