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Finaly, my first planned flash-project is done! didn't imagined that it would take so long time for a newbieatflash like me to finnish this... anyway, it here and my finger hurts!
Nice 'raw' fbf
I like it how you drew every frame. It gave a nice 'raw' frame by frame effect. For a newbie flash Sebbo, this is great!
Although I didn't like the Madness animation. But then again I'm just picky on all things Madness.
Plus, as others said, it needed more sound, bg music, more sound effects.
Perhaps also a replay button instead of just going straight back to the preloader?
You still had a few frames where you forgot to colour the fish. When hes walking upto the package.
All up, pretty good. I give you a 4.
yeh, thats nice to hear, but i didnt find any good sounds nad a fitting bg music... other wise, have u followed the most of the progress and u knew alot on what should happen!
Not too bad for a beginer, I guess. The graphics can be better though...
For your first try, it's not too bad.
give you a 3
Coulda done with a little background music and more sound effects, It seemed like you had spent a lot of time making this then couldn't be bothered to finish it off, I liked the humour and the artwork and it kinda reminded me of some of the things i used to do to my goldfish as a kid >:)
yeh, i agree ther could use some more ´music and sounds, but i didnt found anything. like and elecrtosound, and a bgmusik for the dont do grugs one!
I was going to give you a 3...
But then I had to see the "X-Box sux" thing...
well, i never liked X.Box and ill probobly never will.. and that is msolty there to look funny
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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