Nice 'raw' fbf
I like it how you drew every frame. It gave a nice 'raw' frame by frame effect. For a newbie flash Sebbo, this is great!
Although I didn't like the Madness animation. But then again I'm just picky on all things Madness.
Plus, as others said, it needed more sound, bg music, more sound effects.
Perhaps also a replay button instead of just going straight back to the preloader?
You still had a few frames where you forgot to colour the fish. When hes walking upto the package.
All up, pretty good. I give you a 4.