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This is my first time working on a cartoon series, I hope this is the first of many beautiful things to come!!!
audio needs work
get yourself abetter mic and im sure you'll do fine
i just dont like that messy style
besides the fact that the title's really random, and the phone looked like a palm piolite you did pretty good.
Very nice graphics man
I'm in school, and i have no speakers so i haven't heard sound!
Dont be ofended with my 4 in sound...
Don't worry about it, I appreciate that you took the time out to see it! The sound quality and acting isn't a favorite so maybe its better you saw it without sound.....
Cool art, horrible sound
If you hate your voice that much, use text-to-speech synthesis. Hiding your crappy voice under layers of effects just makes it sound bleary and obnoxious.
Couldn't watch the whole thing cuz the voiceovers sucked so hard.
I'm sorry that you hated the voice acting and sounds so much but I don't think it was my intention to hide my "crappy voice". My use of effects was to get a certain idea across not to mask anything. I personally did not enjoy the quality of sound that I used in the animation but its the best I could do with the technology I have. I have great intentions to improve upon this in future episodes but for now it is what it is. If you personally do not like the sound of my voice, I really can't help you with that! I think thats more of a subjective opinion then an objective view of what I am trying to achieve in the animation.
A short film about a park bench
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