I am very new to actually making movies. This is going to be my first submission when its complete, not including this submission, which is just a test for the preplanned actual first submission... you understand. Good feedback will help let me know what I am doing wrong and right. Thanks
Well I got a lot of useful reviews, and I have already updated a lot of the movies animation. When I made this submission, I forgot to add that Flip_exp is also my partner in this adventure. He helps write the scripts, does voices, and helps draw some of the stills that are used to animate this.