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The Smoker has returned trying to cash his 1.5 billion dollar check. But he has a little trouble along the way.
Too slow, too long, too boring and it is too bad he didn't die so there wouldn't be another story.
Ok, so I didn't actually get through all of this, I closed it off. Why? Cos' it seemed long an tedious, and nothing happened except a whole lot of complaining.
I can get this s*beep*t at work.
But hey, keep trying.
This is one of the best I've seen here on NG. If 17+ watch this one. strange plot twist
While this was easily the longest movie I've ever watched on Newgrounds, it was certainly funny! Some bits did seem to drag on a little, but your voicing talents really made up for it. This must of taken you a very long time to produce, considering the length of it. Excellent stuff. I wouldn't be surprised if this lands up on the front page.
far too long
After what seemed like seven minutes of 'Pawn Shop Scene' I had to turn it off. Your dialogue suffers from what I can only describe as prosaic flab, and your voice acting doesn't do it much justice either. Not that I thought the actual 'voices' themselves were bad (although I did have some difficulty understanding 'Smoker' at times), it's just you didn't put enough subtleties in your dialogue, emphasis, and emotion, to the point where it became pretty monotonous.
Whew, that's the bad stuff aside. On a plus, it LOOKED great, you have a real flair for flash. I liked your narrator, and your lipsync was almost faultless. I just hope you read this now, and take it on board.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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