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Well... this is my second flash movie, of course I have made a lot of experiment with flash but it is my second flash movie.
it was an interesting teaser. it has a pretty cool plot to it and it was very well drawn.
hopefully you are still making a larger animation based on this one.
((( VERY GOOD DETAIL )))
Wow very impressed with the detail and effort in the graphics, and all around envirment, but it was very short maybe to short, i hope you make more cause your skills really do show talent and great ideas, anyways untill next time...
Yeah, I now it was very short.
Yes I will make more flash movies but right now I'm taking a brake u can say.
Thank you for your review!
keep at it!
first things first, many flashes look like copies of ideas, styles and such - but you have gone for your own style, you havnt tried to be the best artist in the world but you kept to your own style, i can see you put an amazing amount of effort into animation, if theres anything you should work on is the sound - persoanlly i feel that sound is 90% of a movie, but all in all this is promised because it looks like you care - dont listen to the morons who quote spelling mistakes, ive probably got about 10 in this passage - theyve probably never made a flash in their lives; before people start calling me up on the fact i havnt submitted anything, just because i havnt submitted doesnt mean i havnt made anything ;)
anyway to summarise:
graphics: very good, cause be improved with shadows in the backgrounds if you have the time that is
sound: needs to be improved; try get a sound which has a feel to the action thats happening
style: i can tell this is your style and you put alot of effort into it; so i gave you a high score for that
animation: i cant critise that, you are by far a better animator than me
story: too early to tell; but it looks very promising
i hope to see this series when it comes out, good luck and dont listen to people putting you down!
Hehe...THANK YOU SO MUCH!! Very good review!! Now I know what to be improved..Very GOOD!!!!
Why? Why? Oh god...
Bleh, nothing to say, but:
Dont watch this 0 Crap. Teaser? i nearly fell asleep.
Need the release date, so i can miss this. 0_o.
Put some real effort in dude, and this could be a winner.
ok...it wasn't a good teaser...sry
When is the release date?
I need to make plans for that day so I miss this entirely.
Nothing in this 'teaser' was teasing me at all. Especially not the bad grammar, bland atmosphere and cliche setup.
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