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Our words will be heard
Hmm well this was interesting The "MUSIC" was really good though, but your flash had mostly all text and a black backing thats actually ok because its the perfect combo for just text, now this was more of a msg then anything else, and while thats cool that you are trying to get your point across, i think you should have done more with it, like you should have added some "VISUALS" like stuff of the what you were talking about of what you dont like or do like, but as said before you just put text and people tend to get bored of that style and such, and you have to give your flash some appeal so others wont get bored of it so easily, and even that you can get people interested in your msg, but anyways, i kinda found this flash hard to review as there really was not much going on, but i do hope the few ideas i suggested do help. anyways good luck. Hope to see something new in the near future.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some visuals, and more then just text as your msg, also it just starts playing you may want to ad a play button and stop action code so it doesnt just start like that, just a few ideas that could improve on this, maybe even have some visuals of the type of flashes you think are bad
A text msg of some sorts, kinda silly.
You think you're fighting fire with fire by making a shitty flash to oppose shitty flashes coming through the portal, but really you are only adding to the problem you are trying to fight against. You weren't the first person to try this or the last, and none of it will ever really effect what comes through the portal, at least back in 2000 there weren't spam crews yet.
I agree, but this movie wasn't worth making
Okay yeah I totally agree with you, back then that was basically the only crap that was ever submitted and unfortunately crap like that still gets submitted today, but was this really worth making a movie of to express your point? It was just text with music, the idea to make this movie wasn't even original, it had been done a few times, before you submitted this.
Thank god theres another person like me
I definintly agree
I agree and I don't.
Okay okay okay, It was okay. I agree and I don't. (possible hideous grammer ahead)
Let me tell you my reasoning:
1. Napster songs and stickfigures and "vote 5 for somthing to happen" are annoying, and are worthless, and are not works of art. These pieces of crap do take up my time and waste my life.
2. However, you may be unintentally endorsing usless blamming. Xiao Xiao, Johnny Rocketfingers, both great stickfigure games/movies. You need to be carful about what you say.
3. The portal is not just full of crap like you say. Some movies suck with the intent to be great. NG to me is not a place where people make movies just to entertain me, but to show off thier skills to me, to practice them and to see if they are good at what they do. (often they aren't)
4. I think we should take your last lines into affect though. Get rid of all those movies that haven't had time put into them. But I disagree with what your saying "get rid of all those movies that aren't works of art." Thats too extreame of a statement.
I'll vote a 5 on this just to keep it's ratings high and for the hopes others will see this.
This is the story of a fearless girl and her encounter with the wicked cold wind god
Art school and religion aren't that different...
a short school assignment
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