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this movie have good graf!

this little movie was pritty good but it needs some more color and alettle more seen.

Good

But could be better...

good stuff

I love this stuff man this was good but kinda short but hey who cares this is very sweet

Exellent series

Ok, I just finished watching the whole series, And I will paste this review on to the others.

The ideal of this series is exellent, The main char, as well as supporting chars. It seems to me however if he aquired blue, that blue color should be added to the following films, and progressivly increase depth of that color as he aquires new colors. And as for the final episode comes, it should be in full color.(just my opinion) I also noticed the background dosent do what it should for the chars movment. My cousin does comic book art, and he constructs his backgrounds in "widescreen" so to speak, and takes frames from set parimaters as the character moves along that background. I'm no animator, but it seems this technique could be used for your story boards to add more depth to the physical movments of you charactors. like so:
(this would be the whole background)
[----------------------------------------------------------
---------]
[] [] [] [] [] [] [] [] [] [] [] [] [] []
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 1011 121314
(these squares would be frame numbers on that piece of background as the main object moved along it walking)

Thats the theory anyway, and you would more or less only need x number backgrounds for your entire episode, say 2-5 depending on lenghth of film. Some of yours were short and could have done with 2 max. I also belive creating 1 large background for x# of frames could save you actual "At the drawing-board" time. As you already have the sceane set up, and dont have to re-start from scratch each time, you want to change the light or make a transition to a new look for the same sceane. My couzin buys paper on a large uninterupted roll (no preforations or stops) and cuts it off when he is done with that background. And any computer can lay your sepratly drawn charactors over this.

Vast improvement in visuals

I was expecting such a sharp improvement in the visuals. The walking scene looked great and while the movie was somewhat short, I think the welcome introduction to a more detailed-world makes up for it. The little mushroom men were a nice touch. .