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Well, I decided to make a flash based on a great joke. Here it is. It is my best so far. I know this submission ain't nothing great, but it means a lot to me. It means I am getting better with flash.
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kanna funny but i learned it differently...
a duck walks into a bar and says to the barman"got any bread" and the barman say"no but we do have some nuts or some crisps if you like" then the duck repeats" got any bread " the barman says (slightly takenaback) "no but we have some other stuff if you'd like" but the duck just asks for bread again this time the barman is quite angry in his response" no we do not sell bread here its a bloody pub " but the duck asks again" got any bread " so the barman responds" if you asks me for bread one more time i'll nale your bloody beak to the the bar " the duck stops to think for a few seconds then asks" got any nales " the barman says" no!!! " then the duck asks again "got any bread".
hope you liked the joke
I loved it!!
That's like a carbon copy of my favourite joke, except the way I learned it, it's a duck walking into a pharmacy asking the pharmasist for grapes, so the pharmacist tells him if he asks again, he'll nail the duck's feet to the floor, so the next day he comes back asking if he has nails.
the music doesnt match the animation
That is the biggest problem.. I think the rabbit is trying to buy a carrot at the laundry place.. thats pretty funny how he pisses the clerk off... but i think if you had voices it would be a lot better... and a lot funnier... for example the rabbit comes in and says "Can I buy some carrots?" the clerk says "No you idiot! This is a laundry mat! If you keep coming in here asking me that stupid question, I'm gonna have rabbit stew tonight!!!"... and so on.. I think stuff like that would make this a better animation rather then bubble clouds with pictures of things in them!.. Voices would score higher!
I don't get the soundtrack, kind of fits maybe maybe with how bored the cleaners clerk looked. The use of images and 'speek bubbles' are a nice break from loud abnoxious bad microphone noise. Classic joke. Overall:
Nothing amazing, just a nice quiet flash easy to follow and not drawn out. Keep going.
It was cute, but that rabbit looked evil. EVIL!!! I kept waiting for it to rip the guys head off.
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