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My fist cartoon. so besides all the hate felt openions, any form of suggestion for improvement would be greatly appretiated.
but be gentle, im a bleeder.
i like it, and i would love to see a sequel.
a few tips for when you make a sequel:
-do not try to improve the graphics, because they are awesome ;D
-improve your spelling a little, just run a MS word spelling check over it or something :S
-keep the penguin in.
i hope to see more works of you,
I love the little guy he is so cute lol I think u did a great job lol Plz do more lol by the way this is my little brother AND HE SO ROCKS Lol plz rate him and give him a 5
whens the next one!!!
Not too shabby
The flash was a little stiff, but the humour and style were pretty good. I especially liked the two titles, reminded me of the old rocky and bullwinkle cartoons. I even enjouyed the comments at the end of the credits, and if that makes me a goober so be it!
could use improvements
but overall a good movie
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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