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It was O.K. but I didnt get the plot
It was O.K. but I didnt get the point of the episode;and if you were going for random,it was a bit TOO random for me:D
I guess it wasn't bad.
Overall, the pilot wasn't too bad. The graphics were alright, but the sound quality could've been better in my opinion. Good job otherwise.
Normally, flashes that predict the future aren't that great in my eyes, but this is perfect! It's also funny. I still have questions. When is the main character's girlfreind ever going to find him? When will you make episode 5?
If only the voices where clearer...
it just may have gotten on my favorites list. The later ones are better though.
At the very least, I should be able to understand what's going on in an animation, which really wasn't the case with this.
The art style was good, even if it was for the most part ripped off from Jhonen Vasquez. But the actual drawings, animation and backgrounds were sloppy and lazy. Spend some more time on this stuff.
The sound was atrocious. I couldn't hear what anyone was saying. Hire some real voice-actors. And from what I did catch this wasn't very well-written or funny anyway.
The music was good though.
A short film about a park bench
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