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this is my second flash animation, it is a little shorter then my first but the animation is smoother, i like it alot
Not a bad movie. Your animations are very smooth, and if you didn't use tweens as you say, that's pretty impressive. Nice blood animations as well.
Just random violence. No storyline other than don't mess with drunk drivers, which doesn't make much sense to me. Add a storyline and try to zoom into your scenes a bit more. Makes it more interesting.
Hmm, I just turned 15 when I did this animation. I look back at it and I have some serious improvements and more of a logical out-look on animations than just pointless violence. I respect your review and score on this one, but for a more updated point of view of my animation skill look at a more recent one ;)
Chargin' mah razor
Well the music had good quality to it.
The action was ok, actually I was hoping for more.
Needed more fighting then it had.
The gun should have been more defined then it was.
For a stick movie it not that bad. I have seen a few too many of them at this point.
The background looks goo. The character momevment was good too.
There is a story behind this animation, my first 20 or 18 frame movie, because of this it wasn't choppy, and there is absolutely no tweens. No symbols, just free handing sticks man.
Always Up For A Stick Movie
The part that I got most confused on was when that one guy had a stick head in his hand. It looked like bullets were coming out of it. I decided to watch the movie again and noticed the other stick guy had a gun, so it got all solved. Not a bad for a start, but could have had some more action. That head and gun scene took up a big portion of the movie. I hope the rest of your stick movies are decent like this one.
I do like how you went and reviewed the movie agian, all my buds said the same thing. I guess I can see where they got it from.
Hey nice job, but i didnt liked to stick figure that much, try making them fatter and try using more motion between these stick figures. If you do this it should look better. For the rest i think it was fine and iam giving you a 5 :D.
Haha, thanks. Yeah, my first sucessful flash. First to make it on NG I mean.
Lol, Ryan. You and your stick-flashes. I told you they don't really get by on newgrounds.
P.S Me at Halo > You at Halo
im not going on halo tooften anymore, you know since im such a noob, lol, check out my new animation
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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