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This is my first movie so hopefully it will go Ok and this is really just to take the piss out of someone so the whole world can see. ^_^)
Decent but needs some work
Lol well ok this was amusing, and anything with starwars i am instantly a fan of but this could be improved on and made much better, like the "LOOPING" adding a stop action code would sufice, as for the action in the film you had lots of it and the graphics were notbad, the jpeg face was entertaining and the jepg explosions were not half bad either, to be honest you did show some good effort on puttong this together and bringing together a story, but the looping should be fixed, aswell as slowing it down abit and adding more to the flash and story itself, I did have a good experiece watching this flash, it just went by too fast, needs slowing down, but all and all its a funny and entertaining flash that i enjoyed, so keep up the good work. hope to see more of your animations in the near future, untill then good luck on your next entry.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off add more to the story, slow the flash down and add more content, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons.
A good story just needs to be slowed down abit.
somewhat funny, but predictable, and the drawings and animation could've used a lot more work, funny concept I guess, just needs a little more effort. But I guess this was the only animation you ever ended up making though.
not too bad, but very short and i didn't exactly understand why it was called the farting menace.... there was no fart jokes in it.
A non-pathetic parody would have been better
It parady of Luke blowing up the Death Star from Star Wars and replacing the Death Star with a giant arse, that wasn't funny at all, it was pathetic, had you done a parody of it using something that wasn't pathetic like an arse and used an object that would actually have been funny it would have been a fairly decent movie, but this sucked.
what the heck were you thinking!! at least make better graphics for this crappy thing and so ya know i like star wars
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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a clock day story
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