you improved!

english:
wow! you really improved since the last episode well done!
you are the dutch guy right? dutch people are the best:P

nederlands:
wow! je bent veel vooruit gegaan sinds het laatste deel goed gedaan!
jij bent die nederlandse jongen toch? nederlandse mensen zijn de beste:P

Better than your first one!

Hmm, it is better than your previous one.
The Graphics were improved, hope that they also are improved in your next episodes.
Hmm, the sound is still not the best.
You have used more instruments in this one, but you don't use much different melodys.
I Think you should make more dark melodys, because this is a dark story also.
I Use the same music program as you, but you can get much more out the program if you try harder.
If you use alot of darker instruments, low tones and less claps and snares it should be much better.
Just try it, and you will see it shall be much better. :)
But, the music in this episode is much better than in your first episode.
There was more violence in this episode than in the first one, but why there aren't any teachers coming to Yoshua because he smash some school kids?
There was also in this episode only a play button.
There was a little bit humor, with the school part when Amsterdam was written on the blackboard.
I see you are making improvements!
Keep up the good work. ;)

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This is so good, that I'l add it to my Fav.!

A little bit of a dimension to this character.

Subtitles aren't to everyone's taste, but I'd personally rather have subtitles than a poorly acted or poor quality voice recording.

Your graphics, though far from the prettiest I've seen, are nice in parts with some decent fbf and a certain style to it all.

The whole school setup seems a bit of an afterthought, an artificial lengthener, after the previous one.

Still, it was a nice introduction and helps to set him up as an outcast.

The arm breaks a little too easily, with a real bend, almost as if he was snapping clay.

I think the character of the boy should be thought through properly before proceeding if you really want to make this a classic series, but he could become a fairly believable character yet. A tragic hero who lashes out too much when provoked thanks to his anger... I like that.

Not totally original, but nothing is. And there's differing degrees of originality and freshness.

I think you obviously have a great deal of talent and could definitely make a great series. Before you do the next one, I suggest you think a bit about the boy. Think about what's actually happening and plan roughly a few episodes in advance, if not even the whole series. I mean, better to end on a high note, and in the very long term, if this becomes a great 10-part series, you could then do a nice ending and start another series with a greater knowledge base, eh?

Ah, I'm rambling. Sorry.

But I did enjoy it and feel it has much potential.

ah man the tight episode.

that episode was tight. but insted of reading say it and yes please make more episode.