Score: 7

"Meh...was ok...."

by: subway23

date: July 29, 2007

Ew that mario in the second scene was gross...

Score: 9

"ha !"

by: slaughterMYdaughter

date: November 30, 2005

at first i thought it was gonna be those cheesy animations where the wire's and cars and shit are directly there so when they get to it but what you did was def.original good worK

Score: 9

"yo"

by: liquidtv78

date: July 4, 2005

that was kinda cool

Score: 10

"cool"

by: mastera-spman

date: May 10, 2005

That was kick ass, im adding this to my favorites.

Score: 6

"An amusing wee thing."

by: Bezman

date: March 2, 2005

Overall - nice work and a pleasurable way to spend those few minutes. At the end of the day, that's what it's all about, innit?

Your sentiment in your comments is very true. As long as you try to make the best you can, you'll find an audience who loves your work.

Anyway, on to my thoughts.

!st cut - obvious joke but mildly amusing. Made me smile.

2nd - not-so-obvious. Made me smile. Took a 2nd watch to see Mario properly. That's a bit... odd...

and makes me kinda laugh when I think about it in depth.

3rd - failed to make me smile.

Soldiers landing on each other was rather amusing, and the end beating was rather nicely done.

I enjoyed it.

Pressed to criticise, I'd say the pace could have been a bit faster - he had that gun in front of his face for way too long for example and the 2nd clapper board took slightly too long I felt.