Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jun 14, 2000 | 5:44 PM EDT

If you liked this, check these out!


Author Comments

A confused young man finds love and terror at church.

Reviews


allie590allie590

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 31, 2012

LOL!



XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 12, 2010

Amusing, can be improved though.

~~REVIEW~~
LOL now i have to admit this was a pretty funny "COMIC-STYLE" Toon you had even liked how it was in the comic style, but before i get to that and the rest of it, i think the "BUTTONS" you have here should be better presented, they are better then most with the hover over color change but you still need to give it somewhat of a design with putting atleast a "PLAY" written on it somehow it would be nice, but anyways, as for the content of the flash it was funny and at times got to be abit much and thats something you actually may have to be concerned about for other people who may not like, but for me i found it somewhat funny, now as for the "ART" i think you could have done a better job say with the sticks you might get better results with more character designs and such, also some more use of color in the backround, there was a number of things, cant go into all of them but what i have suggested here and below are things that will really improve on this so give it some thought, so i found this to be amusing and somewhat funny, i did suggest a few fixes for its improvment but anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things as suggested are backround color and scenes, not just the white bland ones, have the characters more animated like a movie and not so much as a comic style, also wouldnt hurt to have play written on the buttons, Make Characters not the stick kind, while this does take more time and effort but it will make your flash better and with more details for the characters like color, hair clothing some facial detail, it will improve on this and your characters, something to think about for this or your next film, for improvment. So try and work on a few of the suggestions.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall it was an amusing flash but still has lots of room for improving, good luck.

~X~



xo518xo518

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 17, 2009

wierd

that was messed up



El-SydEl-Syd

Rated 2 / 5 stars February 21, 2009

okay

The drawings were baaaaad, and the animation was nonexistant, there was no sound of any kind, but in the end, your style of humor is pretty good, and the gag was amusing.



slysterslyster

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 3, 2008

lol

its was funny but still needs some stuff added to it like 1.need movement 2.needs voices its ok to use figuers but it be beeter if you didnt