grammar

im really so tired of people making notes about how long they took on things, or how much effort, and they cant even spell. im not looking for a grammar lesson, but jesus christ, learn the friggin language! if you dont speak english i can overlook things. either way, the first thing about this flash that jumps out is the amateurish nature of it. random sound clips dont count as audio. graphically, you need more practice. ive only been screwing around with flash for a few weeks and all my visuals look cleaner. remember, we dont know you, so your animation is our only exposure to you.. try to make it higher quality.

okay

I thought this was going to be a movie about baseball but instead it's about cricket? Graphics look like they could be better than this. But that's funny though.. they just kept throwing red balls at darth vader.. I wish the story itself was much longer than that though.

its good

its good but i dont think it should get any awards or anything. good effort. its way better then i could do :) i hope for more from you.

Boring

Good luck on your next one!

Made me lol'

But seriously, Sir donald bradman > Darth vader.