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This was my 2nd flash, I just improved the skeleton and the treasure. Please leave reviews!
It was a good flash. Just work on your animation, and it will be alot better.
thanks, my animation is normally better
Graphics could have been a little better but other than that it was great, nice story, it was quite humourous, nice sound and good animation, nice work for such a small file size, the only thing i would add to it is voices, that would just boost its score a little!
this movie was pretty good, and had a nice little plot to it - which is more than the average movie these days :P haha.
the graphics were clean, the animation was a little slow (but still good), and the odd sound effect here and there made a difference. nice work man, short but still sweet.
(THE THUMB: UP!!)
The drawings were pretty good, but the animation could use some work. With some more time I am sure that you would have the talent to pull off some impressive looking cartoons. The sound looping was a little annoying and wasn't very smooth. One thing you might want to think about doing is adding loops to your sound in another program instead of in flash. The movie did have some funny stuff in it. Not too bad for a 2nd film.
Get someone literate to read the things you write in your flash movies before you put them online. "Big reward if get here first". Sounds like you got it through some online translator. This one was better then the last, actual story. Though it was rather predictable, and that music annoyed me. Cute idea, but the errors grated on me.
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